um..... i know is sounds wired, but i really don't know is't finished yet.
it seems to missing somthing, but i really love the emty feel so.....
i think it's time to stop working on and put down for a while.
I think he's falling and getting rid of the deviant thoughts as he falls. I think that's why it's a thicker pile at the top, and it's a thinner pile closer to his head. Maybe he's falling in love and realizing that all those things he used to dream about aren't as special as the girl he thinks about. Maybe in the end of his fall, the only thought left will be one thin picture of the woman he loves ... and she'll be clothed and thin on one side, and not wearing any clothes and pregnant on her other side ... but smiling on both sides. It's a deviant thought, but only because he's confused between love and lust, and he hasn't yet matured enough to realise that lust is fine, as long as it's for the person you love, and as long as love wins out in the day
Just a thought.
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That is very clever, I certainly haven't seen anything quite like it on DA. Great texturing, I love the cracks. I don't know if I like the transition from the photo to the vector lines, though...it's rather abrupt at the part above the eye...maybe if the lines blended into the skin more? Or maybe that's just me I like the placement of the lines though, and how the one group starts above the eye and the other at the top of the head...er...top of where the head is cut off, heh.
As for giving it a more finished look...personally, I like what you've got, and I think if you added anything, it shouldn't be drastic. Maybe even something simple as a border?
Hey... I posted your pic on my blog with a song that felt with it.
I posted ur name and name of the pic with a link on this page so that people can know ur art more.
If there's anything don't hesitate to tell me
Here's the link of the post:[link]
Regards,
Romston
PS: If one day by chance you continue this art, keep me posted !! I will update it
Again... "Cette art est une merveille!" - This art is marvelous !
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Just a thought.
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MOTTO: Write my anime while I've still got the idea now. Relax, vegitate, and watch other people's animes later.
Check out my original anime script project at [link]
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"Computer games don't affect kids; I mean if Pac-Man affected us as kids,
we'd all be running around in darkened rooms, munching magic pills and listening to repetitive electronic music."
-Kristian Wilson, Nintendo Inc. 1989
As for giving it a more finished look...personally, I like what you've got, and I think if you added anything, it shouldn't be drastic. Maybe even something simple as a border?
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